疫情期间小南瓜的一组英文诗（转）
小南瓜九岁了，眼下在上小学四年级。这是他今年上半年（三年级）码的一组英文诗歌。当时疫情猖獗，学生们都猫在家里上网课，老师的要求之一就是每周码一首诗歌，作为课后作业。基本上极少具体检查督促小南瓜的学习（俺感觉俺当不成虎妈，呵呵），乍一看小南瓜的习作，俺有点儿又惊又喜。须知俺小学三年级时还在和错别字做艰苦卓绝的斗争。那时别说啥劳什子诗歌，就连奋力码的某首粗浅至极的顺口溜，我都会不知不觉中陷入沾沾自喜的状态，而且难以自拔：）
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1) Willow the Wasp
I am a wasp that is yellow and black
You be careful I have a stinger on my back.
Bees and ants are my brothers
We are so close we watch out for each other.
I could torture people like a pest
I also live in a very big nest.
My nests can be either be in a tree or the ground.
My nests can be oval or they can be round.
Unlike a bee I can sting more than once.
Ask my poor little friend named Chrime.
2) Friends
A friend is someone who cares for you,
They're respectful, trustworthy, and truthful too.
But maybe you forget to do what is right,
And you get into a hurtful fight.
When you realize you've done something wrong,
Say you're sorry and then get along.
You can have lots of fun together,
In the different kinds of weather.
Having friends that last forever,
Is to me a great endeavor.
3) A Day in the Summer
The warm summer's breeze
danced through my hair.
A wonderful smell of pine
filled the fresh air.
The moving grass felt soft
beneath my toes.
Then a falling berry
landed right on my nose.
Beyond the eye could see
was all warm and bright.
Sun poured through the trees
making warm and cozy light.
4) Birthday
Birthdays are the best
way better than the rest.
Birthdays are fun for anybody
because you're not a nobody.
I hope your day is great
Maybe your day is going just straight.
I hope you get the good way,
So go and enjoy your very special day!
5) Raccoon
Raccoon, raccoon
Why do you hunt under the moon?
No one is nice to you,
no one thinks you are nice too
Why do you wear that mask?
Does it hide you while doing your task?
You're more around the night
is it because of the light?
You were created as an animal that is very wild
You don't act very mild
Where did you get your energy?
You're busy as a bee
Raccoon, raccoon
Why do you hunt under the moon?
No one is nice to you
no one thinks you are nice too
6) Dinner Time
When it came to dinner
The Lins were not prepared
They sat down at the table
And the food at which they stared
The celery was stringy
And green as the grass
The table was tired
With all that food to grasp
Everything was serene
But then it got old
Everyone had to cope
With every
Slurp, Slurp, Slurp of the Lin family, so bold
The Lins were ecstatic
At how much everyone ate
For they had very little
On their very own plate.
7) I Love to Relax
My life is a cloud because I love to relax.
When I do relax I feel as weightless as a cloud.
I relax at my house, and when I do collapse.
When I get settled I make sure it's not too loud.
A cloud floats where the wind blows
And I follow where my parents take me.
I don't care where I go, but if it's a bad place I know.
When I float where the wind blows I feel free.
8) Colors
Colors will make your day,
Make you smile with its own special way.
Colors are the sun rays of all the beautiful days,
It's like the fragrance of sweet honey,
Like the feel of a tropical breeze.
Without colors everything will be plain.
And we would be insane.
It's like a zebra without its stripes.
A piece of candy without its taste,
A book without its cover.
Colors are like friends,
They bring color into your life.
Colors laugh with you,
Colors cry with you.
Colors do everything with you.
Colors are immortal,
More precious than gold,
Without colors
I don't know what we all would do.
@大猫咪
俺不太懂英文，看到三年级时的小南瓜就能写英文诗歌，惊且叹，太牛了{:4_199:} 这个生日祝福挺好的，可以在送生日贺帖时抄几句小南瓜的诗放在贺帖里了{:4_173:} 荆棘鸟，你家小南瓜真很厉害了。
我大学本科水平，写英文诗的话，也就是如此了。
这水平，高中生一般也达不到。好好培养，很有天分了。之中，一些英文句子，写的相当简练有力。
诗中，以儿童的眼光和想法看世界，简单，纯粹，外加感性。
大猫咪呢，偶看看她的点评。 哈哈，鸟小南瓜真棒，{:4_204:}
纯粹，温暖，又充满智慧， 句式的错落有致，又有童稚而优美的意境。读起来暖暖的。{:5_116:}
赞一个 {:4_187:} 山猫 发表于 2020-12-27 13:49
荆棘鸟，你家小南瓜真很厉害了。
我大学本科水平，写英文诗的话，也就是如此了。
猫版童心无邪，孩子的眼睛比大人看得更透呢 {:4_173:}
那种美好的情感、善良的愿望、有趣的情致，俺们是无法点评的。。。{:5_117:}
大猫咪 发表于 2020-12-27 20:32
猫版童心无邪，孩子的眼睛比大人看得更透呢
那种美好的情感、善良的愿望、有趣的情致，俺们 ...
是哈，比如小孩的画，很有创意，我们大人就画不来那种直觉感。
嗯，大猫咪到底是大猫咪，你太会说话了。：）也的确说的很好。 山猫 发表于 2020-12-27 20:35
是哈，比如小孩的画，很有创意，我们大人就画不来那种直觉感。
嗯，大猫咪到底是大猫咪，你太会说话了 ...
谢谢猫版支持鼓励， 周末 开心。{:4_176:} 大猫咪 发表于 2020-12-27 20:38
谢谢猫版支持鼓励， 周末 开心。
大猫咪周末快乐哇！{:4_176:} 这小南瓜太牛了哈。学了好几十年了，都生了。能释出来吗。 红影 发表于 2020-12-27 10:04
俺不太懂英文，看到三年级时的小南瓜就能写英文诗歌，惊且叹，太牛了
我的感觉是，英文其实比汉语容易学。
以英文为母语的孩纸，平均而言小学三年级四年级就可以看长篇小说，例如 harry porter。
以汉语为母语的孩纸，平均而言要到小学六年级才可以吧。 山猫 发表于 2020-12-27 13:49
荆棘鸟，你家小南瓜真很厉害了。
我大学本科水平，写英文诗的话，也就是如此了。
谢谢猫版，等下我告诉小南瓜，说你在鼓励他。 大猫咪 发表于 2020-12-27 20:32
猫版童心无邪，孩子的眼睛比大人看得更透呢
那种美好的情感、善良的愿望、有趣的情致，俺们 ...
之前我带小南瓜去靖港古镇（在长沙以北，大约 30 来公里吧），让他见识一下中国“古代”是啥样。再说靖港也是我祖父的故乡（出生地）。
靖港有一条街，北面就是普通的商家店铺，南面临水（被堵塞的沩水河），没有店铺，所以这条街叫做“半边街”。谁知小南瓜说这名字不对，因为“一边”表示 1/2，例如“一边西瓜”。因此“半边”就是 1/4，这条街不能叫做“半边街”，只能叫“一边街”。 山猫 发表于 2020-12-27 20:40
大猫咪周末快乐哇！
双猫都快乐！ 樵歌 发表于 2020-12-27 20:43
这小南瓜太牛了哈。学了好几十年了，都生了。能释出来吗。
呵呵，我也陌生了，还认得一些单词，但词汇量比“高峰期”，可能少了几千了：（
紫荆棘鸟 发表于 2020-12-28 03:22
呵呵，我也陌生了，还认得一些单词，但词汇量比“高峰期”，可能少了几千了：（
我是基本上还给老师了。{:4_173:} 紫荆棘鸟 发表于 2020-12-28 01:57
我的感觉是，英文其实比汉语容易学。
以英文为母语的孩纸，平均而言小学三年级四年级就可以看长篇小说， ...
嗯，的确汉语更难学，而我们因为身在中华，自然会汉语，也挺自豪，不用长大后再学这么难的语言了{:4_173:} 紫荆棘鸟 发表于 2020-12-28 03:20
之前我带小南瓜去靖港古镇（在长沙以北，大约 30 来公里吧），让他见识一下中国“古代”是啥样。再说靖港 ...
聪明的小南瓜 {:5_116:} 鸟以后幸福了 {:4_204:} 紫荆棘鸟 发表于 2020-12-28 03:14
谢谢猫版，等下我告诉小南瓜，说你在鼓励他。
好，小孩子就是要多鼓励，能立满满。
荆棘鸟节日快乐！
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