【侠骨柔情】浅议戴望舒兄的“厮守（外一首）”
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">这会闲来无事，就分析下戴兄这两首诗。纯属无事，见笑。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">厮守</span><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">这题目起的好，一个守，让人感受到了一种真诚的灵魂。与厮相和，就能感知两个人相依相偎的那种温暖。一题千里目，幸福传四方。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">戴望舒</span><span lang="EN-US">GG</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">两颗星星在传递眼神，河水清浅</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">多像你我的鲜衣年少。瞬间</span> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">绿蔓爬满心房，攀升向对岸</span> </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">两颗星星，肯定是两颗星星在传递着爱慕的眼神，河水缓缓地流着，清清浅浅，浅浅淡淡，醉里恋音相媚好，年轻就是好啊，青春亮丽，如那翠翠的绿萝爬上了枝丫，向天空招手，向美丽的她招手。这个攀用的好，一下让本节惊艳起来，一种向上的感觉，一种对美好的向往，都在此时向大家展示。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">我用一枚小小的书签，摁住这个情节</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">也接过流霜。有碎碎月华透过篱笆的指缝</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">一枝牵牛花接住，举起</span> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">这枚小小的书签真幸福，因为它盖住了你的眼睛，让此时定格，当然，也一起迎来风雨雷电。风雨过后，碎碎的月光，温柔而暖暖，抚过那个拿着牵牛花的手，十指相扣，向红尘举起。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">半亩良田，我挑水来你浇园</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">桃花，渐渐长成脸颊上的光斑</span> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">我们在星光里晚餐，饮时光</span> <span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:#003300">不求多少富贵，不求多少繁华，只需半亩良田即可。陶渊明式的田园生活，就是你最美好的回忆。挑水，浇园，桃花，成了岁月的痕迹，而相依相携到老，那就是斑驳的日子。简单而充实。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#003300"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">醮你眼前的流波，用我胸中的云巾</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">倾尽一生，擦拭</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">彼此的暮色</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">一生有你，一生为你，眼是水波横，山是眉峰聚，只因有你，一生倾尽，那怕白发依依，也是欢歌流年。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal">
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mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">多么美好的风景啊，在作者的笔下，成了点点断断的回忆，那桃花，那流水，那风雨，那月光，那田地，都是一生的影子，而因为有了你，这世界竟然如此美丽。跨过千年的爱恋，只为一份不变的情怀。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p></p> <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">鹧鸪天</span> <span style="font-family:
宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">无题</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">这个词牌名，我们往往叫小鸟叫。这是与那个长调相比而来的，不过写这个的人较多，可能是比较好的舒发个人的情感吧。无题，就是一个大题目，什么都可以写，当然，也有思绪较多的意思，端看作者之思路。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">戴望舒</span><span lang="EN-US">GG<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">仲夏高深烟满湖，绿华明鉴一卷书。</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">仲夏，这说明写此词时，时正值仲夏。夏日炎炎，烟笼满湖，是热高，还是梦深，皆由这湖水来拥抱着，这一卷书好啊，所有的一切，皆收之这卷书中，是以这夏日成了一池清凉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">洗身朝露凝神有，打坐观音思虑无。</span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">早上的露水，最是喜人的，当然，只有凝神才可以看到，这露水，可以洗清尘，濯红尘。青灯古佛安然坐，一切皆是虚无。这么安然的心，是经历了生活的诸多困境而成就了高山仰止的感觉吧。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">远艳丽，近清姝。尘心赊望两相如。</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">一远一近，美丽靠近。远的是惊世美丽，近的是秋水芙蓉。许是繁华累了心，还是天然去雕饰，清水出芙蓉的感觉好。不过，也许这是赊望，但只要有心，一切皆可能。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman"">繁英看尽关心失，且以虚怀酬梦初。</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">红尘滚滚，三千看尽，失了那种奔跑的感觉，唯以淡淡的感知，来醉了红尘，还原本真。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:宋体;mso-ascii-font-family:"Times New Roman";
mso-hansi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:green">一字看遍天下，一曲弹尽红尘。满纸梦，如流水，桃花流水若等闲，醉了疏虞，醉卧云梯，且看花潮，来去任凭君。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:green"> </span></p><p></p> 真好 雅评回味中 赵一荻MM 发表于 2017-7-18 09:03
鹧鸪天 无题
雅评，学习了。 陆小曼MM 发表于 2017-7-18 09:32
真好
谢谢姑娘。 火山 发表于 2017-7-18 09:34
雅评回味中
{:4_205:}哈哈，乱评。 火山 发表于 2017-7-18 09:36
雅评，学习了。
{:4_204:}见笑见笑。 写评都很精彩。慢慢品。{:4_204:} 杨排风MM 发表于 2017-7-18 12:09
写评都很精彩。慢慢品。
舞会因大家而精彩 精彩，点赞。{:4_199:}{:4_204:} {:4_204:}评的好学习了 哇晒 美银小姐姐好有才吖 解读的真好 杨排风MM 发表于 2017-7-18 12:09
写评都很精彩。慢慢品。
你其实很精彩，只是精力不足，不能一一看来而已 赵飞燕MM 发表于 2017-7-18 13:48
精彩，点赞。
燕子乖乖 花木兰MM 发表于 2017-7-18 14:05
评的好学习了
将军痛快，干杯 绿珠MM 发表于 2017-7-18 14:53
哇晒 美银小姐姐好有才吖 解读的真好
咱直接回家去说好哒 呀，差点错过精彩！写得绝，评得妙，真是个美丽的哈姆雷特，{:4_199:} 看来，舞会过后有时间真得好好消化吸收尼。 千杯醉GG 发表于 2017-7-18 18:23
看来，舞会过后有时间真得好好消化吸收尼。
哈哈，姐能说，不认识你嘛