东城十里 发表于 2024-12-19 21:23

风声是一件往事

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font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp;</span><font color="#413b3b"><span style="font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">是一面由往事垒成的墙</span></font></p><p style="margin-right: 50px; margin-left: 50px; line-height: 2em; text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;</span><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp;</span><font color="#413b3b"><span style="font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">无数次大风刮来</span></font></p><p style="margin-right: 50px; margin-left: 50px; line-height: 2em; text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;</span><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp;</span><font color="#413b3b"><span style="font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">粘贴在墙上,它越来越厚</span></font></p><p style="margin-right: 50px; margin-left: 50px; line-height: 2em; text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;</span><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp;</span><font color="#413b3b"><span style="font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">就这么被推搡着行走</span></font></p><p style="margin-right: 50px; margin-left: 50px; line-height: 2em; text-align: justify;"><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;</span><span style="color: rgb(65, 59, 59); font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">&nbsp;</span><font color="#413b3b"><span style="font-size: 13px; letter-spacing: 2.4px;">再不甘心,也回不了头</span></font></p><p style="margin-right: 50px; 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东城十里 发表于 2024-12-19 21:24

@樵歌 第一节你看过的哈,因为你的回复,我当时回复你的一段话,加了进来

红影 发表于 2024-12-19 22:50

从风声的往事里,感受一路前行中的畅意及困阻,无论悲喜,却是无法回头了。
十分优美的诗句,从入题到展开到点题,结构完整,意象丰满,引人深思。
欣赏东城好诗{:4_199:}

樵歌 发表于 2024-12-20 08:36

东城十里 发表于 2024-12-19 21:24
@樵歌 第一节你看过的哈,因为你的回复,我当时回复你的一段话,加了进来

是的,我看到那句话的余味在悠长,你的灵感真的敏捷,从一句中便能构成联想,从而达到你想要的那种意象,这一点非常可贵!是一个写现代的诗人最宝贵的素质,你成功了。佩服中。

樵歌 发表于 2024-12-20 08:41

这结构很有点码古韵的架势,起承转结。读这首,明显 的感觉到首尾相承,段段相扣。特别是欣赏结尾那段
//背靠着的起点

                            是一面由往事垒成的墙

                            无数次大风刮来

                            粘贴在墙上,它越来越厚

                            就这么被推搡着行走

                            再不甘心,也回不了头
这几句就道出了我们一生的迷惘的无奈!

樵歌 发表于 2024-12-20 08:44

音乐也选得极好,貌似在一种平静无波中走过如烟往事。

世外桃源 发表于 2024-12-21 13:22

听音乐欣赏文字,感受楼主的内心世界

世外桃源 发表于 2024-12-21 13:22

欣赏佳作感谢分享

东城十里 发表于 2024-12-24 17:55

红影 发表于 2024-12-19 22:50
从风声的往事里,感受一路前行中的畅意及困阻,无论悲喜,却是无法回头了。
十分优美的诗句,从入题到展开 ...

谢红影的表扬,在这里你总是很细心{:4_173:}

东城十里 发表于 2024-12-24 17:56

樵歌 发表于 2024-12-20 08:36
是的,我看到那句话的余味在悠长,你的灵感真的敏捷,从一句中便能构成联想,从而达到你想要的那种意象, ...

许多以来的习惯,有一句打动人或打动自己的话,就两边扩扩,注点水,独立成篇{:4_173:}

东城十里 发表于 2024-12-24 17:58

樵歌 发表于 2024-12-20 08:41
这结构很有点码古韵的架势,起承转结。读这首,明显 的感觉到首尾相承,段段相扣。特别是欣赏结尾那段
// ...
起承转合,工工整整,有时是优点,有时是缺点。优点是可显基本功,缺点是缺乏跳跃,固定呆板。这中间的度其实一直是我许多时候会迷惘的地方

东城十里 发表于 2024-12-24 18:00

世外桃源 发表于 2024-12-21 13:22
听音乐欣赏文字,感受楼主的内心世界

嗯嗯,诗歌和音乐,算是另一种精神上的世外桃源,可以在里面自己和自己对话

红影 发表于 2024-12-24 20:38

东城十里 发表于 2024-12-24 17:55
谢红影的表扬,在这里你总是很细心

东城的诗句写得好,总是吸引人不觉读进去,并引发读者的想象呢{:4_187:}
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