【月满花潮庆华诞】祖国啊我亲爱的祖国（舒婷）

澜天发表于 2025-10-4 17:12

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letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">数百年来纺着疲惫的歌；<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">我是你额上熏黑的矿灯，<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; 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background-clip: initial;">我是干瘪的稻穗，是失修的路基；<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">是淤滩上的驳船，<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">把纤绳深深勒进你的肩膊，<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">祖国啊！<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; 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text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">是“飞天”袖间，<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">千百年未落到地面的花朵。<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">祖国啊！<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; 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background-clip: initial;">我是你挂着眼泪的笑涡；<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">我是新刷出的雪白的起跑线；<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">是绯红的黎明正在喷薄；<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">祖国啊！<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; 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background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">你的富饶、你的荣光、你的自由；<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">祖国啊，我亲爱的祖国！<o:p></o:p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-family: 楷体; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); letter-spacing: 0pt; font-size: 14pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="margin: 0pt; text-indent: 0pt; padding: 0pt; 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梦江南 发表于 2025-10-4 17:25

很喜欢舒婷的诗。我家还有一本。

梦江南 发表于 2025-10-4 17:27

欣赏点赞！{:4_187:}

澜天发表于 2025-10-4 19:00

梦江南发表于 2025-10-4 17:25
很喜欢舒婷的诗。我家还有一本。
有这一首没
你查查看

红影发表于 2025-10-4 20:43

这样的诗句特别适合用来朗诵，而澜天的朗诵也很好地展现了诗句的内涵。
欣赏澜天好帖{:4_199:}

樵歌发表于 2025-10-4 20:57

《祖国啊，我亲爱的祖国》是当代诗人舒婷于 1979 年创作的一首抒情现代诗。
舒婷是朦胧诗派的代表人物之一，她崛起于 20 世纪 70 年代末的中国诗坛，和同代人北岛、顾城、梁小斌等以迥异于前人的诗风，在中国诗坛上掀起了一股 “朦胧诗” 大潮。她出生于福建龙海市石码镇，1969 年下乡插队，1972 年返城当工人，1979 年开始发表诗歌作品，1980 年到福建省文联工作，从事专业写作。其主要著作有诗集《双桅船》《会唱歌的鸢尾花》《始祖鸟》，散文集《心烟》等。
《祖国啊，我亲爱的祖国》曾发表在《诗刊》1979 年 7 月号上，并获得中国作协 “1979-1980 年全国中青年优秀诗作奖”。这首诗共四节，从历史、现实、未来三度空间，描述了中国过去的贫穷和人民千百年来的梦想与苦难，也展现了中国令人振奋的崛起和新生。诗中大胆地将内在情感与外在客观物象融合，创造出一系列感性和理性交融的鲜活意象，抒发了对祖国的挚爱，表达了渴望祖国强盛的心愿和愿为祖国富强而献身的精神。

樵歌发表于 2025-10-4 21:02

诗人以满腔的爱国热忱，讴歌了我们的祖国
这首诗歌一改她朦胧诗的风格
用歌吟体以真描的手法来写的
诗歌语言很平实很亲切很动情
所以你朗读越来肯定也是心情很激荡的
言自心生
所以这首现代诗是最近以前朗诵得最感人的
我都着点被你读哭了。。。。。。。。

小辣椒 发表于 2025-10-4 21:08

欣赏优美的背景音乐，聆听澜天老师的精彩诵读，太赞了！

梦江南 发表于 2025-10-5 07:48

澜天发表于 2025-10-4 19:00
有这一首没
你查查看

我留下的是第一本《最后的挽歌》，查过了有这一首呢。

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:06

红影发表于 2025-10-4 20:43
这样的诗句特别适合用来朗诵，而澜天的朗诵也很好地展现了诗句的内涵。
欣赏澜天好帖

这是去年的帖子
偶尔翻到
就发了

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:08

樵歌发表于 2025-10-4 20:57
《祖国啊，我亲爱的祖国》是当代诗人舒婷于 1979 年创作的一首抒情现代诗。
舒婷是朦胧诗派的代表人物之一 ...

你这样详细介绍一下
我们对诗人有了更全面的了解
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澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:10

樵歌发表于 2025-10-4 21:02
诗人以满腔的爱国热忱，讴歌了我们的祖国
这首诗歌一改她朦胧诗的风格
用歌吟体以真描的手法来写的

你有这么脆弱吗
这么会感动的呢
^_^
这首诗是去年录的
声调比较平
那时候我追求电台聊天腔
很不成功
现在觉得应该再激昂些才好

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:12

小辣椒发表于 2025-10-4 21:08
欣赏优美的背景音乐，聆听澜天老师的精彩诵读，太赞了！

这个背景音乐确实不好找
如果自己会做后期
就没有这些难度
要找到录音平台上
合适的背景音乐
还真的不容易
因为选择面比较小
这一个是我最满意的
时长和氛围节奏
包括音乐转换
我都很满意

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:15

梦江南发表于 2025-10-5 07:48
我留下的是第一本《最后的挽歌》，查过了有这一首呢。

真好
节日快乐
{:4_204:}

梦江南 发表于 2025-10-5 13:56

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:15
真好
节日快乐

我喜欢她的一首“致橡树”。双节快乐！{:4_204:}

樵歌发表于 2025-10-5 19:51

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:10
你有这么脆弱吗
这么会感动的呢
^_^

现代诗歌不能太过激昂
觉得还舒缓一些为好。
总之我不懂
当不懂装懂吧{:4_189:}

樵歌发表于 2025-10-5 19:56

澜天发表于 2025-10-5 13:08
你这样详细介绍一下
我们对诗人有了更全面的了解

我因为以前也是现代写得较多
我几个朋友都是诗人
和他们在一起也听到一些
现在有强大的AI工具了
一问啥都出来了
就像有人一天内写出好多首古韵大长调一样方便呢。

澜天发表于 2025-10-6 08:12

梦江南发表于 2025-10-5 13:56
我喜欢她的一首“致橡树”。双节快乐！

我也很喜欢
过些时候录一下

澜天发表于 2025-10-6 08:13

樵歌发表于 2025-10-5 19:51
现代诗歌不能太过激昂
觉得还舒缓一些为好。
总之我不懂

当然还是古韵耐读呢
中秋快乐
{:4_204:}

澜天发表于 2025-10-6 08:14

樵歌发表于 2025-10-5 19:56
我因为以前也是现代写得较多
我几个朋友都是诗人
和他们在一起也听到一些

我对知之不多
就等你这专版开通
也来搅和搅和
弄些玩玩

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